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Visions I hear

April 10, 2014
By Decipher SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
Decipher SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
5 articles 2 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To be a writer is a condition, not a profession." -Robert Frost


Pounding on the walls inside
My head
My cranium
Skull
Don't touch me
I'm dead
Inside me, the voices
Loud as the blood curdling screams
Heard at night by me
And only me
The screams I can see
Not only hear
Scare me to death
The visions I hear.



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on Apr. 22 2014 at 7:49 pm
Decipher SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
5 articles 2 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To be a writer is a condition, not a profession." -Robert Frost

Thank you  

on Apr. 22 2014 at 7:48 pm
TheLorax BRONZE, Parkland, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The first draft of everything is s***&quot;<br /> -Ernest Hemingway

Needs work. Very short and not much to it, just random words resulting to a certain topic. Keep trying though, you have lots of potential!

on Apr. 22 2014 at 7:48 pm
themajesticpoet BRONZE, Bloomington, Other
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The rhythm is very good.  And it was simply well penned... Good job!

on Apr. 14 2014 at 7:57 pm
Decipher SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
5 articles 2 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;To be a writer is a condition, not a profession.&quot; -Robert Frost

Thank you very much!

Lucifer666 said...
on Apr. 14 2014 at 6:38 pm
Lucifer666, Hell, Other
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Nicely written, thid piece is thought provoking "the viosiond i can hear" brilliant line! Great job

on Apr. 13 2014 at 8:30 pm
Decipher SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
5 articles 2 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;To be a writer is a condition, not a profession.&quot; -Robert Frost

Thank you! 

TheUniverse said...
on Apr. 13 2014 at 8:29 pm
TheUniverse, Everywhere,, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Exercise to stimulate, not to annihilate. The world wasn&#039;t formed in a day, and neither were we. Set small goals and build upon them.

I love it, great rhythm and good vision!!!  Keep up the great writing!!