good, but It looks a little seperated.

Hey! I like the premise of this poem and your title is really good; it drew me in very quickly. I will say, though, that your punctuation could use some changes. Some lines would be better with a period at the end and others, a comma. For example, the line 'My part of the bridge is still there' could use a comma at the end instead of a period. With a comma, I think the sentence would flow a bit better and even give a stronger acount of the emotions expressed to the reader. I think if you rework things like that in this poem, it'll make a difference. I hope this helps.