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Saudade (noun ; longing, nostalgia)

January 26, 2014
By drcf98 PLATINUM, Charleston, South Carolina
drcf98 PLATINUM, Charleston, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Love and a cough cannot be concealed, even a small cough, even a small love." - Anne Sexton


Saudade
(noun ; longing, nostalgia)

I.
We were the dirty footed girls,
the truth twisting girls,
the secret keeping girls;
laying in a field somewhere
tying knots in the stems of daisies
and blowing white off dandelions.
We had slightly red, wide eyes
with wet lashes.
Through shadowy vision we saw
clouds, naive white shapes
morphing into one another.

II.
We were the clouds.





And we could see everything below.
Our fathers understood and
our mothers were reserved,
and the entire world was fed at night.
Everyone homes and places to go.
And everyone visited her sister and the children
on the weekends. And everybody drank tea
and had small tattoos on clean wrists
and everybody was okay and nobody was broken.
Only occasionally did we cry,
and the world didn’t even mind that.

III.
In that moment, in that two-thirty a.m.
Half of the lights were off,
small pools of light
hovered above a few lamps.
We were sitting
in a circle to the left of the bed,
cross legged with smudged makeup.
We were talking like teenage girls,
giggling about kiss and tells,
ranting about parents.
And whispering about
sins and wickedness.
And oh how we wished
we could just be clouds instead.



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on Jun. 29 2014 at 9:27 am
bewareofbunnyrabbits SILVER, Winona, Minnesota
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"Empty yourself and let the universe fill you." -Yogi Tea

This is awesome. You have an amazing talent with words

on Jan. 29 2014 at 3:57 pm
drcf98 PLATINUM, Charleston, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Love and a cough cannot be concealed, even a small cough, even a small love." - Anne Sexton

thank you so much, I'm truly flattered! The title is a portroguese (spelling?)  word for longing/nostalgia that doesnt have a direct english translation.

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on Jan. 29 2014 at 12:25 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

This poem to me is universal. It's not just about teen girls longing to be something they're not; it's about teens trying to make sense of the universe they live in. Longing of becoming the people they dream of becoming. I really enjoyed the second stanza (albeit a few less and's in my opinion—not to be critical—would make it flow a little nicer). Your descriptions are simple. But unforgettable. There's no need of becoming all hoity-toity (is that a word?). The language is genuine. Congrats on the Editors' Choice. Really beautiful stuff here. By the way, what does your title mean? Just curious.