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A Mouthful

January 13, 2014
By blueolive GOLD, Bowmanville, Other
blueolive GOLD, Bowmanville, Other
13 articles 2 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You cant go looking for love, you have to let love find you".


A mouth-
of gloyness
ful

combusting your lungs.


With the desire for


adventure.
Tiptoe your way
Through the best of
Life’s dark shadows.

I love you sweet
Vengeance.

Don’t look at me that
Way, darling.
I hate myself but
I love what you do to me…



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blueolive GOLD said...
on Feb. 26 2014 at 3:21 pm
blueolive GOLD, Bowmanville, Other
13 articles 2 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You cant go looking for love, you have to let love find you".

thankyou:D the orginal i actually drew a picture along with this

blueolive GOLD said...
on Feb. 26 2014 at 3:19 pm
blueolive GOLD, Bowmanville, Other
13 articles 2 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You cant go looking for love, you have to let love find you".

wow thanks for the feedback!!! it really means a lot :)

JRaye PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 26 2014 at 11:28 am
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
43 articles 10 photos 523 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, &#039;I just don&#039;t care.&#039;?&quot;

You should know that when your words cause a physical reaction in the reader - THE HAIRS ON THE BACK OF MY NECK ARE STANDING UP - you're a sincerely good writer :)

on Feb. 25 2014 at 7:42 pm
haley101 DIAMOND, Windsor, Connecticut
70 articles 5 photos 195 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness. It took me years to understand that this too, was a gift.&rdquo;<br /> <br /> ― Mary Oliver

i love this. it's one of my favorites, not only because it's thought provoking, but because you personify vengeance in such a creative lustful way, while simutaneously making it dark. I like that sort of style, because it's similar to my own.