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White December

November 27, 2013
By heartagramflex PLATINUM, Moore, South Carolina
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heartagramflex PLATINUM, Moore, South Carolina
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"No hope = No fear." - Peter Steele

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Rain, rain go away
The snow is here again today
Coming down like twinkling embers
Moving toward a white December

Blanket the ground
With your soft subtle flurries
Freeze the roads over
For people who are in hurries

Dancing flames keep us warm
Inside a shelter in our home
Shielded from the frigid cold
To the air my heart is sold

© Barbara S., Hoffman Estates, IL

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heartagramflex PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 4 2013 at 9:50 am
heartagramflex PLATINUM, Moore, South Carolina
31 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;No hope = No fear.&quot; - Peter Steele

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PLEASE DO! Send a picture of it to me though! :D  
Blynn SILVER said...
on Dec. 3 2013 at 8:40 pm
Blynn SILVER, Waco, Texas
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I really like this, the idea of this, but some of it sound childish, like the second stanza. Good job though! I think you could improve it
Lullabymidnight BRONZE said...
on Dec. 3 2013 at 10:42 am
Lullabymidnight BRONZE, Ailey, Georgia
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OMG!!! can i steal this??!!!! i wanna put it up in my room!
TheDolphin ELITE said...
on Dec. 3 2013 at 4:04 am
TheDolphin ELITE, Iloilo, Other
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well, you DESERVE it
heartagramflex PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 2 2013 at 10:37 am
heartagramflex PLATINUM, Moore, South Carolina
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&quot;No hope = No fear.&quot; - Peter Steele

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Thank you! :D
heartagramflex PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 2 2013 at 9:51 am
heartagramflex PLATINUM, Moore, South Carolina
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I appreciate the feedback! :D
heartagramflex PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 2 2013 at 9:51 am
heartagramflex PLATINUM, Moore, South Carolina
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&quot;No hope = No fear.&quot; - Peter Steele

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Thank you!
heartagramflex PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 2 2013 at 9:51 am
heartagramflex PLATINUM, Moore, South Carolina
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&quot;No hope = No fear.&quot; - Peter Steele

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Wow, thank you! I appreciate the feedback!
TheDolphin ELITE said...
on Dec. 2 2013 at 3:49 am
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i felt cold when i read it...it's so great  
heartagramflex PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 1 2013 at 6:20 pm
heartagramflex PLATINUM, Moore, South Carolina
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My dream is to get in the mag!! :D
dinks PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 1 2013 at 6:18 pm
dinks PLATINUM, Hinsdale, Illinois
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Great poem!
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD said...
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I like what you did with the rhyme scheme and the December theme. Hope this makes the magazine! Nice work. :D
feychild21 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 1 2013 at 1:49 pm
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This makes me want Christmas! :) I also like how you place descriptions of fire and snow next to eachother, great job!
lazania BRONZE said...
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i love this!!!
Jadesnewgroove PLATINUM said...
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This is a really good piece!