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Nobody

November 19, 2013
By Pargaran SILVER, New Glasgow, Other
Pargaran SILVER, New Glasgow, Other
6 articles 3 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are, and say what you feel. Because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss


Hello?
Nobody answers
She has hidden her scars
She let them simmer
and boil inside
She's drowning in her own tears
Gasping for the air
that nobody can give her
She screams
but nobody hears



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on Jun. 29 2014 at 1:16 pm
Pargaran SILVER, New Glasgow, Other
6 articles 3 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are, and say what you feel. Because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss

Thanks so much!

on Jun. 29 2014 at 1:14 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
22 articles 1 photo 439 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret" -Ambrose Bierce
" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

I can surely relate to this feeling. It's simple but has all the words we need to say in such moment and feeling. I loved it, it's awesome !!! ^_^

on Jun. 25 2014 at 10:49 am
Pargaran SILVER, New Glasgow, Other
6 articles 3 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are, and say what you feel. Because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss

Thank you!! (:

on May. 1 2014 at 7:53 pm
MicahMorrison GOLD, Washington, DC, District Of Columbia
17 articles 0 photos 22 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's not too late, it's never too late" -Three Days Grace

That's AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

on Apr. 30 2014 at 11:44 am
Pargaran SILVER, New Glasgow, Other
6 articles 3 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are, and say what you feel. Because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss

Thank you! I'm glad you can relate, it's nice to have company in these feelings.

on Apr. 30 2014 at 11:43 am
Pargaran SILVER, New Glasgow, Other
6 articles 3 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are, and say what you feel. Because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss

Thank you :) What I usually write is longer, but this one just stuck as a kind of cursory poem.

on Apr. 30 2014 at 11:33 am
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 437 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

Great work! And I can understand this feeling! Love this!

Sail_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 30 2014 at 11:32 am
Sail_ BRONZE, Eugene, Oregon
3 articles 10 photos 196 comments
Wow, this is really sad, and simple. I liked it a lot, though I wish it was a little longer, haha

on Dec. 13 2013 at 6:33 pm
Pargaran SILVER, New Glasgow, Other
6 articles 3 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are, and say what you feel. Because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss

Thank you very much for the comment! I often can't write short poems; I get all caught up in them. But this time it actually worked out, haha. (: And I know what you mean!

on Nov. 26 2013 at 4:30 am
book.junkie GOLD, Kingston, Other
18 articles 1 photo 48 comments
wow its short and u still get that feeling u can get to the point and still make it realistics while others must give 10 or so lines to make you feel sad (*cough cough*)  WELL DONE!

on Nov. 24 2013 at 2:51 pm
Pargaran SILVER, New Glasgow, Other
6 articles 3 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are, and say what you feel. Because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss

Thank you very much! I love to convey feelings. (:

on Nov. 24 2013 at 2:50 pm
booklover303 SILVER, Morgan Hill,
8 articles 5 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"School days are the unhappiest in the whole span of human existence. They are full of dull, unintelligible tasks, new and unpleasant ordinances, with brutal violations of common sense and common decency." -Henry Louis Mencken

Nice! It really makes you feel what the person in the poem is feeling!