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October 19, 2013
By CookieMonster24 PLATINUM, Delhi, Other
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I think this would feel
Like a bunch of little kisses.
Or immensely mind numbing pain,
As your soul is sucked out through Satan’s evil black starfish minions.

Aren’t you a ray of sunshine today?

© Narongsukchai T., Sachse, TX

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chezbona SILVER said...
on Sep. 20 2014 at 4:36 pm
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your wildest imagination is just the beginning,make the sky your starting point.<br /> To a better world,<br /> Chez bona.

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I'm with shade
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on Nov. 6 2013 at 12:19 pm
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I love this! the last line is amazing!
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It's kinda short, and kinda odd..... I feel like I'm missing something here, but I'm gonna give it a 4/5....
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Wow! I really like this! It has a twist in it and I very much enjoyed reading it. 
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Very well done, short but strong, an ability I have always admired in people. 5 starss!!