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Silence

July 26, 2013
By Kindle GOLD, Sudbury, Other
Kindle GOLD, Sudbury, Other
11 articles 0 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no subject so old that something new cannot be said about it." -Fyodor Dostoevsky

"Forgive me my nonsense, as I also forgive the nonsense of those that think they talk sense." - Robert Frost


I want to give you a loving smack in the face!
~With a kiss?


No! With my fist!

I want to feel every beautiful bone break under my fingertips!
~But why?


I’m angry – simply mad with love.

I want to see the pain in your eyes - oh, the loving pain!
~You hurt me.


Shut up.

I want to clasp my hands around your neck until you cannot breathe!
~


… Are you alright?

What have I done? Oh, no. I'm so sorry. Please forgive me!
~


I don’t deserve anyone more perfect than you. I’m sorry.

You have to understand that I love you more than any other!
~


Where have you gone?



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Kindle GOLD said...
on Aug. 17 2013 at 5:41 pm
Kindle GOLD, Sudbury, Other
11 articles 0 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no subject so old that something new cannot be said about it." -Fyodor Dostoevsky

"Forgive me my nonsense, as I also forgive the nonsense of those that think they talk sense." - Robert Frost

Thank you! You have no idea how much that means to me :)

Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Aug. 17 2013 at 5:28 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 631 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

This is very eerie and solemn, but I love everything about it! What a wonderful concept wonderfully written. Its speaks the truth of love, and your metaphors are perfect. I find the format very difficult to create, but you make it look so easy! Great job with this; Its one of my favorites :)

on Jul. 29 2013 at 12:22 am
Angel1932 PLATINUM, Antioch, California
33 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love can touch us one time and last for a lifetime" ~ Celine Dion
"If you're going to pray don't worry... if you're going to worry don't pray." ~ Mariah Carey

Thank you, you are a very in depth writer! good job! 

Kindle GOLD said...
on Jul. 28 2013 at 9:25 pm
Kindle GOLD, Sudbury, Other
11 articles 0 photos 93 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There is no subject so old that something new cannot be said about it." -Fyodor Dostoevsky

"Forgive me my nonsense, as I also forgive the nonsense of those that think they talk sense." - Robert Frost

Sure will! :D

on Jul. 28 2013 at 8:27 pm
Angel1932 PLATINUM, Antioch, California
33 articles 0 photos 90 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love can touch us one time and last for a lifetime" ~ Celine Dion
"If you're going to pray don't worry... if you're going to worry don't pray." ~ Mariah Carey

This is excellent! I love the mysterious twist in this, this is nice, keep writing!.. ~Please check out some of my work