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Heartbreak
May 30, 2013
You always told me I was right,
Even when I was wrong.
You always held me tight,
You were always so strong.
You always made me happy,
Never to sad.
But when you did break my heart,
You felt so bad.
You called me, you pleaded,
You wanted me back.
I almost fell for it,
But was caught in a crack.
They told me not to do it,
But I never did listen.
You made me feel beautiful,
You made me glisten.
You kept feeding me lies,
And telling no truth.
About all of the girls,
All I wanted was proof.
I needed you then,
I need you now.
But you left my presence,
And I still wanna know how.
© Hilary R., Woodland Hills, CA
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Crystallite BRONZE said...
on Feb. 18 2014 at 11:10 am
i like this a lot....lol it brings back memories
Zach_M said...
on Jun. 5 2013 at 5:47 pm
haha I like the flow, but some of the lines didn't have the proper syllables, but i guess that's your style of writing. Besides this being a typical piece... i really enjoyed reading how you felt at a particular time in your life. For you to write about it, shows that it weighed heacy upon you at a particular time in your life. I love your rhyme scheme... and you made your words gleam with a sad beauty; overall you did a great job.
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"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."