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Forgotten

May 28, 2013
By Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.
- Christopher Paolini


Nobody's going to wait for you, so do it now.
-Ingrid Michaelson


Broken hearts heal, but never the same.
- Jessica Romo

Idiots rely on luck.
-Sherlock Holmes


I lay here,
Wrapped in my daydreams.
I have forgotten,
The world around me.
No matter where I look,
I see a daydream.
Even when I see,
What is right in front of me,
I never truly see,
Because I have forgotten reality.



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on May. 28 2013 at 5:38 pm
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.
- Christopher Paolini


Nobody's going to wait for you, so do it now.
-Ingrid Michaelson


Broken hearts heal, but never the same.
- Jessica Romo

Idiots rely on luck.
-Sherlock Holmes

Thank you, Lexus! This poem actually surprised me on two levels: first it got posted on the front page of the poetry and second, it was aprroved about fourty minutes after I pitched it!

on May. 28 2013 at 5:33 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
27 articles 0 photos 423 comments

Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

Hello! I always enjoy reading poems by you, they are always so brilliant and well though out. I can tell that you take your time and mean what you write. I love the concept, a bit like the valley. I love that even though you don't describe anything physically I can still visualize someone, like myself, daydreaming. And the picture is a maze and looking at it is like daydreaming! I love the tiny elements of rhyme and repetition. As always, great job.