Hey there! I tend to do research on religions from time to time just because I find it very interesting. And I actually just looked up to see the difference in our religions after reading your poem. I am Christian. But, anyways, again I am so impressed with your work. I really enjoy the title.. I too wrote a love poem with the title being of a different language. Mine was the phrase 'I Love You' in German. I find it very unique when writer's do that. I think it draws the reader in because they have never heard the word and want to know what it means. And I think after reading the poem, the reader feels a connection to that word. Or maybe that's just me. Anywho, I love how this poem was supposed to be something different and switched.. when that happens it must be meant to be, right? I really enjoyed the first sentence, I thought it was so clever and really emphasized what this was all about. And your vocabulary, WHOA. I am like in awe of it. The descriptions of happiness and the tastes of strawberry, oh my. You are a wonderful writer. Bravo! I loved this.