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I Want to Hold Your Hand

April 28, 2013
By cmalcolm DIAMOND, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
cmalcolm DIAMOND, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
"Who you Finna Try"


I want to hold your hand
It's gentle curves so delicate
But strong and rigid
You grace the visage of my palm

Your hand makes me feel wanted
It Makes me feel warm
It Makes me feel protected
It helps me weather the storm

Our spirits can dance out our fingertips
Glossy memories dance through our palms
Our lives can intertwine
Weaving together on Love's loom

It's just two hands though
Mindless interlocking of fingers
Seemingly meaningless
The comfort of your hand lingers

Just to hold your hand
For a second, a minute, an hour
I'd give the world for it
This action has the most divine pow'r



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on Nov. 16 2013 at 10:29 pm
Deej6595 BRONZE, Billerica, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I--I took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference.

This is very good. I like the meaning of it. There is a bit of hopeless romatic in all of us. I think.

on May. 3 2013 at 5:46 pm
cmalcolm DIAMOND, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
54 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Who you Finna Try"

Thanks! It means alot that people care to comment. :)

on May. 3 2013 at 12:01 am
Melenium SILVER, Heritage Park, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Started from the bottom now we're here - Drake

great poem!

on May. 2 2013 at 11:12 pm
cmalcolm DIAMOND, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
54 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Who you Finna Try"

For sure!!!

on May. 2 2013 at 10:12 pm
DoNotRegretThyFall SILVER, Wayzata, Minnesota
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You may tell a tale that takes up residence in someone's soul, becomes their blood and self and purpose. That tale will move them and drive them and who knows what they might do because of it, because of your words. That is your role, your gift.

I love this! If you guys could come check out my poem and rate it, that would be great. Thanks!

on May. 2 2013 at 8:08 pm
cmalcolm DIAMOND, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
54 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Who you Finna Try"

I know right! It's just sooo... soothing, and comforting, it's hard to explain. :)

on May. 2 2013 at 6:09 pm
Wow, this is really good. I understand what you are saying. The deeper meaning of holding hands, the content feeling. Really strong.

on May. 2 2013 at 1:28 pm
cmalcolm DIAMOND, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
54 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Who you Finna Try"

Thank you so much! :)

on May. 2 2013 at 1:21 pm
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.
- Christopher Paolini


Nobody's going to wait for you, so do it now.
-Ingrid Michaelson


Broken hearts heal, but never the same.
- Jessica Romo

Idiots rely on luck.
-Sherlock Holmes

Amazing imagery, and great meaning.

on May. 2 2013 at 10:53 am
cmalcolm DIAMOND, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
54 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Who you Finna Try"

Thanks! It means so much!

on May. 2 2013 at 10:39 am
kailasulli SILVER, Asheboro, North Carolina
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This creates a beautiful imagery and I love the little rhyming parts!  :)