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Cool Big Bro

April 8, 2013
By sadesdd DIAMOND, Elma, Iowa
sadesdd DIAMOND, Elma, Iowa
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A bright cool kid with spiky hair
Drawing was his thing
Summer rolls around
Sleeping til 11:30 everyday
Little sis was up
Waiting for her bro to wake
Making tuna for lunch
Renting movies
Riding on the handle bars of his bike
Hanging out in his room
Taking pics
She thought it was so awesome
At night he would let her in
Then stay up as late as they could
A loving brother through and through
Helping him study
Ace his test
Him giving her life advice
Staying up late learning to dance
Or talk seriously
Getting ready for school together
Picking her up early some days
Taking a day trip to awesome places
She had the cool big brother
Til one day
He left

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on May. 25 2013 at 6:54 pm
sadesdd DIAMOND, Elma, Iowa
90 articles 0 photos 213 comments
Thank you a lot! It was a hard thing and I'm glad you got the message of the poem! This is the stuff that makes me smile! Thanks again!

on Apr. 20 2013 at 10:11 pm
outtheresmallone GOLD, Sedro-Woolley, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
“Resist much, obey little.”
― Walt Whitman
“If you are a dreamer come in
If you are a dreamer a wisher a liar
A hoper a pray-er a magic-bean-buyer
If youre a pretender com sit by my fire
For we have some flax golden tales to spin
Come in!
Come in!"
Shel Silverstein

I could feel the feelings of the little girl in this one. I really enjoyed it.