Snowfall | Teen Ink


March 19, 2013
By CountryPopGirl PLATINUM, Lawrenceville, New Jersey
CountryPopGirl PLATINUM, Lawrenceville, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"You love someone, you open yourself up to suffering, that's the sad truth. Maybe they'll break your heart, maybe you'll break their heart and never be able to look at yourself in the same way. Those are the risks. The thought of losing so much control over personal happiness is unbearable. That's the burden. Like wings, they have weight, we feel that weight on our backs, but they are a burden that lifts us. Burdens which allow us to fly..."
-Dr. Jack Hodgins (Bones)

I stood up from the ground
I had a headache
It was still snowing
I started walking when the snow started clump
It made a door
A door of snow in front of me
It was perfect
And shined a bright light

I wondered why this showed up
Then I remembered
I was walking to feel numb
I didn’t want to feel anymore pain
Then the rock hit me
I felt my forehead
There was blood dripping
I dropped the rock

I looked at the door in front of me
It seemed to call me
I was walking toward it
I got a bad feeling in my stomach
I walked through the door

I was in a new world
It was too bright to see
I heard a constant ringing in my ears
I couldn’t feel anything
My mouth was dry
I smelled the air.
It was surprisingly. . .
Almost too clean for heaven

Where was I?

The author's comments:
I just thought of this one day

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