thank you very much and no problem

Thank you for being my very first commenter. I have been her on two months know and have had so much feedback! Your free verse was very discriprtive and a vivd view of imagrey.

thanks i will take note of that  

Thanks for noticing :)

Nice use of white space! Overall, it has a very ocean-y feel to it. However, there are some similies (such as "soft as silk") that are far too generic/cliche for use in any serious poem. Just a thought.

I like the spacing you did here. I also like how the dream is a nightmare but yet you can find beauty in it:) this is awesome:)

Thank you!

thank you very much

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nice work..  :) so much in so lil words... pretty cutely awful dream you thought ..