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Zoo Lujan

February 8, 2013
By ronanronan SILVER, Blue Bell, Pennsylvania
ronanronan SILVER, Blue Bell, Pennsylvania
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Zoo Lujan
Do you remember,
The crazy zoo that had no laws?
How about the alpacas,
or the crazy lions and tiger claws?
Well, here’s what you need to know:

We started off with the goose chasing us,
we were startled,
but we were on a bus.

Then we saw the wild pigs,
the crazy sheep
and the goats dig.

Next we wandered to lunch,
even though it was one,
it felt like brunch.

After we went to the macaws,
then the monkeys,
before hearing those tucan calls.

Following that, we headed to the snake,
iguanas, and more parrots.
The photographer took as many pictures as he could take.

Then, we walked to the lions,
tigers, and bears OH MY!
And saw more lions, sea lions, that is.

Finally, we trudged to the hay bails,
and held baby tigers,
my mom said she did, but she really failed.

After that, we happily trotted back to the bus,
that is one
of the stories of you and us.


The author's comments:
This is also in Argentina

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on Feb. 28 2013 at 10:54 am
ronanronan SILVER, Blue Bell, Pennsylvania
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Actually it was for my 2nd grade teacher

on Feb. 28 2013 at 10:53 am
not_moon BRONZE, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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no, he wrote it for his kindergarden english teacher. duh!

suju&dbsk said...
on Feb. 11 2013 at 9:55 pm
This is a very nice poem. Its nicely done and humorus.

suju&dbsk said...
on Feb. 11 2013 at 9:10 pm
This is a very good poem its also very discriptive.

suju&dbsk said...
on Feb. 11 2013 at 8:59 pm
This was a very interesting poem. It was very discriptive.

Pugsy BRONZE said...
on Feb. 11 2013 at 4:17 pm
Pugsy BRONZE, Plymouth Meeting, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Peace comes from within -the Buddha

Hey Ronan,  I like the piece, very creative and descriptive.  When did you send this in to get published?

on Feb. 11 2013 at 11:07 am
ronanronan SILVER, Blue Bell, Pennsylvania
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I know, I'm amazing

marys1 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 11 2013 at 11:05 am
marys1 BRONZE, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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we have a winner!!!

mmskobie1 said...
on Feb. 11 2013 at 10:51 am
we have a winner ronanronan!

on Feb. 11 2013 at 10:38 am
lilly.gilmore, Blue Bell, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;When life gives you lined paper, write the other way&quot;<br /> -William Carlos Williams

Congrats, ronanronan!

SirLocoPanda said...
on Feb. 11 2013 at 9:31 am
Did you write this for your first grade english teacher?