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Flying with my soul

December 24, 2012
By NarutosimG GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
NarutosimG GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
10 articles 2 photos 55 comments

Wings are treasure bigger than gold. If you have wig sing in their presence or show to the world from the sky who dare look up from below. But my wings won't fly so they are useless like sliver. Because of this I keep my hidden so no one can see.They are dead or perhaps broken I am not really sure. Lost in thought of never being able to fly while everyone off and I far behind. So I cut my wings and buries in the soil apart of me was gone but another grew inside. I walk toward the sky with no regrets but with laughter of the happiness I felt to let myself be open to the world. But without knowing I was flying off the ground on my own.

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Maldivian said...
on Jul. 27 2013 at 9:16 pm
Maldivian, Fuvahmulak, New York
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very good ....keep up the good work

on Dec. 31 2012 at 4:46 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

I really do like this poem and the pic. The only thing I'd say is to proof read it again. Found some simple mistakes. Other than that, Nice Work!

on Dec. 30 2012 at 2:30 pm
AhtmahKhalsa DIAMOND, Espanola, New Mexico
54 articles 1 photo 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
''Be Formless, Shapless, Like Water...When you put water in the cup, you become the cup, when you put water in the teapot, you become the teapot, be water my friend...'' -Bruce Lee

''The Only enemy we have to fight is ourselves''-Morihei Ueshiba

Very Good! I Love It! :)

on Dec. 30 2012 at 11:13 am
Wordfreak1 BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
2 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"F*ck you." - Feli to this guy that made her mad.

It is a great poem and I just wanna say that I always could tell you were an angel. Good job

on Dec. 29 2012 at 8:52 pm
AnushLoveee17 GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
16 articles 2 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
sometimes you have to forget whats gone appreciate what still remains and look forward to whats coming next

Nice poem i love great job