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Dreaming

December 23, 2012
By RedSoxFan1903 BRONZE, Schnecksville, Pennsylvania
RedSoxFan1903 BRONZE, Schnecksville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Any time you have an opportunity to make a difference in this world and you don&#039;t, then you are wasting your time on Earth&quot;<br /> - Roberto Clemente


The day I first saw you, I could not get you out of my mind. Night and Day, Day and Night, you consumed every thought of mine. My dreams would race with situations in which we were together. I imagined taking runs in the dead of winter, but our love and friendship would give us warmth. I dreamt of comforting you in times of sorrow just as you would comfort me. I thought of us gazing at the stars and talking about our hopes and dreams. Now, I realize more than ever that you are who I want. Your intelligence, your beauty, your personality all bring me to my knees. If you could just find it in your heart to love, we could be destiny.


The author's comments:
I'm completely new to writing poetry, and I have no idea if this is any good. Would appreciate any comments/thoughts on the poem and whether or not this would be a good poem to actually give to this girl. Thanks

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