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blue on my skin MAG

December 10, 2012
By aladine_98 SILVER, Hemet, California
aladine_98 SILVER, Hemet, California
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i touch the pen
to my forearm
and a flower blooms

so blue against
my tan skin
like the dark indigo
of the pristine ocean

next is a word
scrawled handwriting
traced on my ankle
beautiful, meaningless
and empty

she asks me
why do you draw
on your arms
and write such
strange words

and i don't
tell her
that it's better
for the blue
to be on my skin
for the world to see

than inside
some deep emotion
hidden in my heart



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on Jul. 2 2013 at 4:10 pm
aladine_98 SILVER, Hemet, California
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Yay! You found me! :D Finally! And thanks for that. :) It means a lot.

on Jul. 1 2013 at 9:52 pm
DisneyGirl17 BRONZE, Hemet, California
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I found you! Finally! I miss your poems...they're so beautiful..and familiar! 

on Jun. 23 2013 at 4:59 am
Josephinecatherine1 BRONZE, Brussels, Other
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Favorite Quote:
''Shoot for the moon, even if you miss you'll land amongst the stars''

My favourite piece by you, very intriguing and mysterious all at once. 5/5

on May. 5 2013 at 6:24 pm
aladine_98 SILVER, Hemet, California
8 articles 0 photos 69 comments
Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed my writing. :) But I'm a little confused... did you mean to comment on my other story? The Meteorite In My Library?

KatsK DIAMOND said...
on May. 5 2013 at 11:15 am
KatsK DIAMOND, Saint Paul, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Being inexhaustible, life and nature are a constant stimulus for a creative mind.<br /> ~Hans Hofmann<br /> You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you.<br /> ~Ray Bradbury

I really like this. It's funny how we barely notice everyday occurrences until someone shows it to us. I'd honestly never thought of this. Really good job.

on Feb. 2 2013 at 6:16 pm
Thatdaydreamer GOLD, Peterborough, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;You can make anything by writing.&rdquo; <br /> ― C.S. Lewis

This is brilliant! Short yet poignant, very well written:)