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Can't Live

November 30, 2012
By PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

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Take

away the pain that I feel in my soul.

Drown


me with happiness and joy.
Make

my life completely, and fully whole.

I can't live like this anymore.

© Fallon K., Baldwin, NY

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PurpOreos SILVER said...
on Jan. 20 2013 at 11:28 am
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

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Yeah it was, Thank you!
PurpOreos SILVER said...
on Jan. 20 2013 at 11:27 am
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

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Thanks for the Advice. :)
jdaniels1779 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 26 2012 at 6:31 pm
jdaniels1779 BRONZE, New York, New York
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I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel.
Maya Angelou

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Hi got99 I can tell this was an emotional poem. I can really sense that in your word choice. It was deep dude :)
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 9 2012 at 12:36 am
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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That was short but sweet, and very imforming. Maybe you could try using stronger adjectives.