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October 10, 2012
By bulby545 SILVER, Butternut, Wisconsin
bulby545 SILVER, Butternut, Wisconsin
8 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life gives you lemons you make apple juice

The punch is done
The pain sets in
The war is won
The mind is lost
Loved ones returned
But the dead ones burned
The pain will settle
But the hurt will remain

The heart torn
But the land reborn
Anger now faded
From places once raided
The war may be done
But the fight is not won
The mind crippled
The pain tripled
We all fight the war
For we are the WAR

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on Aug. 19 2013 at 2:52 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

I think you nailed it good work, i like how its short sweet but rrue

Sbooboo SILVER said...
on Feb. 7 2013 at 3:09 pm
Sbooboo SILVER, Park Falls, Wisconsin
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I love you even though i feel you though your poems i love when u write them. It touches my heart in so many places you wouldnt belivie 

on Dec. 4 2012 at 5:14 pm
allhallowsevekatie PLATINUM, Hampden, Massachusetts
39 articles 16 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Believe me nothing is trivial"(The Crow)

i loved it it is very  good and correct... i have family members that served.....

pitt98 GOLD said...
on Nov. 29 2012 at 6:47 pm
pitt98 GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
10 articles 3 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's not the days in life we remember, rather the moments." 
- Walt Disney

I like this poem. It's sort of sad and kind of melancholy. Good Job

Hannabug GOLD said...
on Nov. 28 2012 at 10:11 pm
Hannabug GOLD, Winona, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the Divine." Ludwig van Beethoven


on Nov. 23 2012 at 10:59 am
L7SquariaN GOLD, Madison Heights, Virginia
15 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love, Life, Loyalty, and Living Long Like Legends. That's that L7.

Oh, wow. This one is amazing. 5/5

on Oct. 15 2012 at 4:57 pm
Smileykin234 SILVER, Owasso, Oklahoma
8 articles 1 photo 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm not lazy, I'm an energy saver.


Woah! This one Rocks! I cant wait to read more!