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September 27, 2012
By Photographywonder PLATINUM, Unfortunetly, Texas
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Photographywonder PLATINUM, Unfortunetly, Texas
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"You can't wait for inspiration to come to you, you have to go at it with a club"
"Can anything be sadder than work unfinished? Yes; work never begun"
"Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes.Art is knowing which ones to keep"-Scott Adams

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I need someone
but no one is there
I need someone
but there is no one to trust
I need someone
to help me through
I need someone
to save me
Save me?
Please.
Save me??
Please!
Save me!
It's to late to be saved.

© Brit H., Peabody, MA

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Photographywonder PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 2 2012 at 9:05 am
Photographywonder PLATINUM, Unfortunetly, Texas
23 articles 10 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can't wait for inspiration to come to you, you have to go at it with a club"
"Can anything be sadder than work unfinished? Yes; work never begun"
"Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes.Art is knowing which ones to keep"-Scott Adams

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Thanks so much :)
Roper GOLD said...
on Oct. 1 2012 at 10:46 pm
Roper GOLD, Krum, Texas
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"What a boy can do, A girl can do better"

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Someone at some point will same just keep faith and hope. And it will never be to late. Love the poem!
Photographywonder PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 30 2012 at 5:16 pm
Photographywonder PLATINUM, Unfortunetly, Texas
23 articles 10 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can't wait for inspiration to come to you, you have to go at it with a club"
"Can anything be sadder than work unfinished? Yes; work never begun"
"Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes.Art is knowing which ones to keep"-Scott Adams

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Thank you wery much
Photographywonder PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 30 2012 at 5:16 pm
Photographywonder PLATINUM, Unfortunetly, Texas
23 articles 10 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can't wait for inspiration to come to you, you have to go at it with a club"
"Can anything be sadder than work unfinished? Yes; work never begun"
"Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes.Art is knowing which ones to keep"-Scott Adams

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Thanks so much. And it's amazing, the trueness of what you said about hearts and their screams. Nobody can hear because they are deep inside of us, and most don't take the time to listen. Thank you for your kind words. 
theshadowofanobody GOLD said...
on Sep. 30 2012 at 4:39 pm
theshadowofanobody GOLD, Belle Mead, New Jersey
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Hearts scream, an ear-splitting, earth-shattering, piercing scream...But why is it that no one can hear it?  Is it too late if I were to hear at last? If you need someone, I'll be there.  Even if I am but a stranger. You're in my thoughts. May your hopes, your dreams come true. You're an extraordinarily powerful writer. 
LunaLives GOLD said...
on Sep. 30 2012 at 10:21 am
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Great poem. Just remember that it's never to late to be saved. Good luck on your future writing.