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my personal version of the road not taken

September 25, 2012
By allhallowsevekatie PLATINUM, Hampden, Massachusetts
allhallowsevekatie PLATINUM, Hampden, Massachusetts
39 articles 16 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Believe me nothing is trivial"(The Crow)


my heart belongs to the rivers,
my love goes out to the trees,
your envy belongs to the wealthy,
your anger is given to gods.
i will be me and you will be you
but to myself i will always be true
the choice is yours can go right or left,
two paths and only i choose the best.


The author's comments:
i did this for English class and my teacher loved it, i have always loved writing and decided to try this.

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on Apr. 10 2013 at 7:11 pm
allhallowsevekatie PLATINUM, Hampden, Massachusetts
39 articles 16 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Believe me nothing is trivial"(The Crow)

thank you ! if you liked it you should look at some of my other pieces !

on Dec. 4 2012 at 5:12 pm
bulby545 SILVER, Butternut, Wisconsin
8 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life gives you lemons you make apple juice

i like this poem cuz its a shorter one so i can stay focused  and it has nice rythme

on Oct. 2 2012 at 4:30 pm
deepoceanblue PLATINUM, Syracuse, Utah
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Great! I loved it!

on Sep. 29 2012 at 11:21 am
allhallowsevekatie PLATINUM, Hampden, Massachusetts
39 articles 16 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Believe me nothing is trivial"(The Crow)

its my favorite poem 2

on Sep. 29 2012 at 11:18 am
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

This is amazing! I love how you took a famous poem every one Should know and gave it your own personal twist!!!

hypermagical said...
on Sep. 29 2012 at 11:16 am
hypermagical, Indianapolis, Indiana
0 articles 0 photos 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can quote me on that.

Holy awesomeness! :P I'm so glad you did this, a new take on one of my favorite poems, good job!