That was amazing! (:

I love this (:

This poem...although simple, has a definite young soul, singing her hearts out for all to hear and dance along. This poem, has the soul of a child, when i read it...i return to who i was years ago, once a dreamer, now a doubter. Why is this? Read my own writings my friend and you'll see why, my language is...very different from these poems you have. This poem, i think...is the simplest expression of youth I've come across now. Although, expand your vocabs will help, as it will color your taste further. Your poem have a taylor swiift, country feeling to it somehow, call me odd, but it does.