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I promise

July 3, 2012
By writer3499 GOLD, New Bedford, Massachusetts
writer3499 GOLD, New Bedford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"it's impossible to live without failing at something, unless you live so cautiously that you might has well not have lived at all-in which case you fail by default."

You promise to catch me when I fall
You promise to listen when I talk
You promise to hold me when I cry
You promise to be strong when I am weak
You promise to be there when I need you
You promise to be there when I need you
You promise to give me space I want it
You promise to never let me be scared
You promise that I can trust you
You promise to be my best friend
You promise to accept me for who I am
You promise to love me when no one else does
I promise to do the same

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sonJaNae said...
on Sep. 28 2012 at 7:56 pm
sonJaNae, Fort Wainwright, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"No one can change a person, but someone can be a person's reason to change" -Spongebob Squarepants

This is so sweet! Love it :)

so_joy SILVER said...
on Aug. 15 2012 at 9:34 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Beautiful! Absolutely magnificent! Please read,rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!

Mr. Kuttner said...
on Jul. 20 2012 at 1:14 pm
Beautiful stuff- suggest you edit the lines that end in "I" (personal pronoun)- just move the I to th next line ex.: when/ I talk- puts more emphisis, combines doer and action, and just sounds better.  Your writing is brilliant- hope your summer is full of fun!!