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The Pressure

April 21, 2012
By PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

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I don't know what to do
This concerning you
You've been such a fool
Which is not cool
You need to be banned
You should have just ran
Instead you decided to stay
And ended up getting played
By your peers
Now your crying tears

© Brittany T., Ocean Shores, WA

The author's comments:
This was the first poem I wrote, this poem was for a Poetry book assignment at school. And at the time I disliked poetry.But now I really like it. This is one of my favorite poems.
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Sparkle1pops PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 2 2013 at 8:41 pm
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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"No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist."
- Oscar Wilde

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Hey! I really like this since it was your first this is great! I also started poetry at school and hated it, but I grew to love it and foun TI by chance :) I am so glad I did!
vaidaspade10 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 24 2013 at 5:30 pm
vaidaspade10 BRONZE, Davenport, Washington
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"No matter what they say behind your back, they're at a loss because you've locked the knife drawer. Forgiving them now will just leave your back sore." -Qiana Casch

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Really liked this.! I rated it a 5 star. Read some of my stuff sometime! :)
LunaLives GOLD said...
on Nov. 30 2012 at 8:30 pm
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

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Great message. I wish I had read this a long time ago. It would have saved me a lot of grief.
PurpOreos SILVER said...
on Jun. 5 2012 at 6:51 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

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Thanks :)

 

AngelaAxelson GOLD said...
on Jun. 5 2012 at 6:44 pm
AngelaAxelson GOLD, Littleton, Colorado
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“Every day, think as you wake up, today I am fortunate to be alive, I have a precious human life, I am not going to waste it. I am going to use all my energies to develop myself, to expand my heart out to others; to achieve enlightenment for the benefit of all beings. I am going to have kind thoughts towards others, I am not going to get angry or think badly about others. I am going to benefit others as much as I can.”


― Dalai Lama XIV

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Wow nice! 5 stars for sure, it has such point! The only suggestion would be changing a couple word choices and it would be 6 stars!
PurpOreos SILVER said...
on May. 5 2012 at 12:16 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

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Thanks so much!!
DanielM. said...
on May. 5 2012 at 11:56 am
Awesome Message!!! Great Job!! i really liked the first sentence it caught my eye.