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Metaphor For Us

April 11, 2012
By Black_Veil_Bridesmaid GOLD, Frisco, Texas
Black_Veil_Bridesmaid GOLD, Frisco, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Sui.icide is not cowardly. What is cowardly is making somebody hurt so much they want to kill themselves." Ashley Purdy
"Money can't buy happiness, but it can buy bacon, and thats pretty much the same thing." Andy Biersack
"Your not alone" Andy B

If I am the stars
then you are the sky
holding me up
teaching me to fly
if I am a fish,
then you are the sea.
Whenever in embrace,
We are all we can be.
If I am a heart,
then you are my soul.
Holding me together,
keeping me whole.
So if you are you,
and I am me,
Then together as one,
we will always be.

The author's comments:
This is written about a guy that I am currently dating. I originally just showed it to my friends, but they convinced me to post, so here it is!

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leafy said...
on Jun. 4 2012 at 10:03 am
leafy, City, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Gil: I would like you to read my novel and get your opinion. 
Ernest Hemingway: I hate it. 
Gil: You haven't even read it yet. 
Ernest Hemingway: If it's bad, I'll hate it. If it's good, then I'll be envious and hate it even more. You don't want the opinion of another writer. 

Haha I definitely sensed some Zechy-ness in this poem, even before I read the Author's Note ;). Anywhos, great poem! Usually I don't really like rhyming, but this was good ^_^