Intoxication | Teen Ink


April 11, 2012
By Simply_Ciara GOLD, Hopkinsville, Kentucky
Simply_Ciara GOLD, Hopkinsville, Kentucky
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"You hurt her constantly,
She's blinded by your broken promises and intoxicated on your so called "love"
She changes her life and becomes a rebel to please you, yet you show no effort
She gives up everything for you, but you give up nothing in return.
She sees you as flawless, I see you as a sinner and hypocrite.
She makes one mistake and you preach the wrongness of it and put her down, You make millions of mistakes on purpose and all she does is forgive you
She cries her eyes out begging and on her knees for you to return
You clearly don't see the jewel you possess
But maybe if one day she becomes sober and leaves you will see the little things you once overlooked"

The author's comments:
I just want to put it out there that this is NOT about me it's about a very close sister like friend.

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on Sep. 25 2012 at 8:26 am
loveissmiles GOLD, Lynn, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I live for the nights I can't remember with the people I will never forget." -Carassisa M-<3

"What the mind can perceive, the body can achieve." -Softball Coach Steve B-

I love this! I really shows the way you feel for her. I love the raw emotion in some of the words that is just inevitable. I wish the format was easier to read instead of in paragraphs, but other than that dont change a thing.