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Salutations

April 4, 2012
By SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

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When will it come to be,
I wait and wait,
when will this pain,
finally end?
It seems I've become careless,
as I realize my fate,
the tremors of a broken heart,
a soul broken till it can,
die no more.
I'm asking only for,
this sickening pain to fade,
I say,
"be done with me!"
But I only suffer more.
I guess I'll continue,
to wait and wait,
I'll wait for the end,
the end of pain.
If I die,
from this terrible fate,
then you can give me,
all your salutations,
I'll be in peace.

© Brooke W., Weston, MA

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SuNshiNe007 ELITE said...
on Apr. 13 2012 at 11:21 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Wow, thanks so much! I tried doing that..It didn't sound right at first but I wanted to write something I have never written before:) It was a little tricky, Lol..
snowleopard100 PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 13 2012 at 9:08 am
snowleopard100 PLATINUM, New York City, New York
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I really love the dialoge/question setup. It brings drama and emotion to the message your sending. Beautiful job.