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Simple State of Being (Revised)

April 2, 2012
By MissFree BRONZE, M, Pennsylvania
MissFree BRONZE, M, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Friends are the family you choose"

The feeling I am feeling
Is like being suspended in water
Floating up
While being pulled down
Time has stopped
And I open my eyes
To see a bright sky
But clouds roll in
And a breeze makes me shiver
My fingers are numb
As children swim about
And people wade in life
And I am suspended
In a state of simple being
With the sky above
And water beneath

The author's comments:
I found typos in this when I first posted it, so here is the revised version.

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