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March 9, 2012
By Shnitzal-Face SILVER, Pflugerville, Texas
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Shnitzal-Face SILVER, Pflugerville, Texas
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She is more sacred than others
A girl, my sister
She is a wonderful being more rare
More beautiful,
Purer, more perfect
And more delicate than the wildest dreams of any poet
I could never believe her to be
My own
Her beauty is a well, a spring of the purest water-of-life
And to look upon her is to drink, and drink, and drink, and drink again
She is rare,
A perfect, most godly creation
A work of the purest art
A delicate flower that blooms in the liquid light of the very moon
A nature not of this musky world
A personality like that of a biblical maiden
Most gracious and queenly
I find it difficult,
To believer her,
My own

© Brittany S., No. Platte, NE

The author's comments:
Dancing, singing, twirling, smiling. All my sister, she was the inspiration for this poem.
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Sarah_Oso SILVER said...
on Sep. 30 2012 at 7:00 pm
Sarah_Oso SILVER, Peachtree City, Georgia
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Yes, Sarah, very beautiful. :) Your love shows through your words.
youngspeare BRONZE said...
on Aug. 28 2012 at 11:37 am
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wow! It's so beautiful..how often do you find a person who loves their sibling this much!
It's unique and amazing! Keep posting :-) 
 
ofpaintedroses GOLD said...
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this is beautiful
Mr.Indescribable SILVER said...
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This is beautifullllll
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This is so sweet!!!
starrynightangel BRONZE said...
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This poem is soo sweet. Shes lucky to have a sister like you :)
rockmafia-611 BRONZE said...
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oow i like it.Good job you should keep writing
FK092495 SILVER said...
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I love it and so would my sister. Really Good Job!!! :)
SkylerMorningstar GOLD said...
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i love it. its really cute :)
surfergirl98 PLATINUM said...
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wow this is amazing. i dedicate this to my little sister. For you RKK