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My Lord, Forevermore

March 6, 2012
By XCBVIA GOLD, Delaware, Ohio
XCBVIA GOLD, Delaware, Ohio
14 articles 1 photo 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
NGU. Never give up.


Here you were, and you were there,
you seemed to be everywhere,
like a shadow gliding across the floor,
you sneak up on me like you always have before,
you sweep me up,
in your arms,
and hug me,
I'm yours,
my lord,
forevermore


The author's comments:
Just a try at poetry. BE TRUTHFUL and tell me what you think.

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on Mar. 13 2012 at 9:13 am
Miss_Brightside GOLD, Defiance, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
It&#039;s like she sees the diamond underneath And she&#039;s polishin&#039; you &#039;til you shine. -Brad Paisley. (this goes to my step mom she keeps me going)<br /> If you want a rainbow you gotta put up with the rain.-Albert Einstein

hey thanks for commenting on my poem. This was really good. i really liked it.