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I was wrong

February 7, 2012
By Nessa13 GOLD, Charlestown, Indiana
Nessa13 GOLD, Charlestown, Indiana
18 articles 0 photos 109 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love, but never fall in love, because things that fall get broken"
-Taylor Swift


Wow…I thought that I had it all wrapped up. I guess I was wrong. You want her, and I understand. But how can you just drop me? How could you just not care? I thought that we had something…Again, I was wrong. I hate that you can make me feel so weak. That with every kiss, you make me melt…I hate that feeling. I thought that I was making you smile a little wider, and making your eyes shine a little brighter. I guess I was yet again…wrong.


The author's comments:
This si to the girl that found someone else...

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Nessa13 GOLD said...
on Aug. 15 2012 at 9:11 am
Nessa13 GOLD, Charlestown, Indiana
18 articles 0 photos 109 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love, but never fall in love, because things that fall get broken"
-Taylor Swift

Thank you super much for your input. I might just make this into a short story(: Thank you, and I will keep writting!

Nessa13 GOLD said...
on Aug. 15 2012 at 9:11 am
Nessa13 GOLD, Charlestown, Indiana
18 articles 0 photos 109 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love, but never fall in love, because things that fall get broken"
-Taylor Swift

Thank you super much for your input. I might just make this into a short story(: Thank you, and I will keep writting!

AriShine GOLD said...
on Aug. 13 2012 at 3:42 pm
AriShine GOLD, Norcross, Georgia
13 articles 0 photos 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Whatever you are, be a good one." -Abraham Lincoln

This deals with deep emotions, and deep emotions are always great food for writing. However, this is more like a rant than a poem. Some symbolism may help, or you could incorparate this into a short story instead. Keep writing!