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The Tears Of Battle

February 2, 2012
By SkylerMorningstar GOLD, Barrie, Other
SkylerMorningstar GOLD, Barrie, Other
13 articles 1 photo 47 comments

Through the blood red sky the birds fly
underneath the blood red clouds they ride
to battle to death to save there land
for God provides all living things
and we the people of the land destroy all living things
for we are greedy
we are selfish

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on Apr. 22 2012 at 8:20 pm
katieRainbows BRONZE, Stockton, California
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Favorite Quote:
I was going to take over the world, but I got distracted by something sparkly.

love it sky


on Feb. 12 2012 at 7:15 pm
Plain-Jane ELITE, Grandview, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"And the Lamb at the center of the throne will be their Shepherd. He will guide them to springs of living water; and God will wipe away every tear from their eyes." Revelation 7:17

This is a great poem. I would suggest proof-reading first(you did "there" instead of "their"). the topic was great and i lvoe the title. the phrase "blood red" really caught my attention. keep up the good work!