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January 19, 2012
By .king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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I read your poem of life
and every line, I fell
the other me released
and all that wrapped around me,
was a blanket of tears
sinking into your words
staining in your ink
then finally too much
I felt I had belief
sniffing in my joy
risking all my time
eventually I thought
I had to accept
your quotes
your words
your meaning,
of Life !

© Abby S., New Carlisle, OH

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A strong poetess encouraged this poem, this poem was almost to her, but it's for world. Expressing the way her poem effected me !
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denifelice SILVER said...
on Jan. 29 2012 at 12:55 pm
denifelice SILVER, Flourtown, Pennsylvania
6 articles 15 photos 149 comments

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&quot;There are far, far better things ahead than any we leave behind.&quot; -C.S. Lewis

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It's well-written, but somehow I don't understand it. Good job, though!
SeizeTheDay SILVER said...
on Jan. 29 2012 at 11:34 am
SeizeTheDay SILVER, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 60 comments

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Carpe Diem (Seize the day).

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Wow! Really good!! Keep up the amazing work!
starlight26 GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2012 at 11:08 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
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*life isnt about pretending to be something you&#039;re not. It about being who you are and finding someone <br /> who loves every bit of it.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Life&#039;s tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late&quot;

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AHHHHH loved ittttttt!!!! You're so talenteddd
marissadele PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 27 2012 at 9:01 pm
marissadele PLATINUM, Danbury, Connecticut
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&quot;If you know how you feel, and so clearly what you need to say, you&#039;ll know it. I don&#039;t think you should wait. I think you should speak now.&quot; -Taylor Swift

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This is absolutely lovely =) keep writing! 5/5
IntanThalia BRONZE said...
on Jan. 27 2012 at 3:58 am
IntanThalia BRONZE, DKI Jakarta, Other
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We all have been degraded, we all will be the greatest.

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this is touching somehow
seaofsorrows GOLD said...
on Jan. 27 2012 at 12:03 am
seaofsorrows GOLD, Lynnwood, Washington
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Love. A four letter word, short but true. With no hope of being defined. But what&#039;s new? <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> -S. Jordan

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I love this poem. You did such an amazing job. thank you for inspiring me.
stardreamer SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 10:34 am
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I love this poem especially the last line! :)
KaylaMarie1996 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 9:39 am
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This is really good! I loved it!
DumbSkoolBoy BRONZE said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 9:09 am
DumbSkoolBoy BRONZE, Kansas, Missouri
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Amazing it really got to me
NightGoddess17 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 7:27 am
NightGoddess17 PLATINUM, New City, New York
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amazing! great job! favorite lines "sinking into your words, staining in your ink." beautiful job!
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:23 am
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
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&quot;A girl doesn&#039;t need anyone who doesn&#039;t need her&quot; Marylin Monroe

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this is amazing i love it:)
iamawesomeK SILVER said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:22 am
iamawesomeK SILVER, Wilmington, Delaware
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I am sure I won&#039;t be able to fit that many quotes in here.

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Impressive poem
Ms.Attitude06 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 6:10 am
Ms.Attitude06 BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
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Ohkay.. now this was something different..!! I really liked it.. I mean, i felt it in my heart, so now I know that it's really awesome. Good Job! :D
cookiestar said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 5:53 am
Wow, this is touching, beautiful and emotional:). I loved it. Good job!
BloodyMary PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 5:21 am
BloodyMary PLATINUM, N/A, Other
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Is this a poem you made for me? Lol just kidding. It speaks directly to me! I'm amazed! :D I re-read it over and over again... I'm touched. It is indeed from the heart!