Waterfall | Teen Ink


January 9, 2012
By Fabala_G BRONZE, Broomfield, Colorado
Fabala_G BRONZE, Broomfield, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Try to learn to breathe deeply,
really to taste food when you eat,
and when you sleep, really to sleep.
Try as much as possible to be
wholly alive, with all your might,
and when you laugh, laugh like hell,
and when you get angry, get good
and angry. Try to be alive. You will
be dead soon enough."
William Saroyan

Tumbling, laughing, dancing down a crumbling staircase.
She doesn't stop for anyone.
Around her, seasons change. Darkness grows. Terror rises.
But she dances on, unfazed, unashamed.
She smiles a little and continues
Twirling and falling, jumping and  beaming,
She doesn't care. 
Her jealous beauty is untouched
As is her heart.

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on Jan. 11 2012 at 3:15 pm
n3xtusplaya DIAMOND, Honolulu, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"It's better to be hated for who you are than to be loved for what you are not."

~Luara Moncur

awesome! As I read this I could picture a girl doing just that...in her own little world unaware of her surroundings...love it!

on Jan. 10 2012 at 5:50 pm
Rainbeauxs SILVER, Bridgetown, Other
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This is nice!Lovely descriptions!Five stars :D

on Jan. 10 2012 at 3:46 pm
yazigirl BRONZE, Athens, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"people say hell is endless. i say hell is empty and all the demons are here"- one tree hill

its good i like the discriptions. Try making it longer u know to get the reader more into it. but i liked it!!