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Revelation

January 6, 2012
By Madfish GOLD, Mercersburg, Pennsylvania
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Madfish GOLD, Mercersburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Happiness is only real when shared.

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Was there one moment
when I knew
it was love?

Was there a click,
a lightbulb,
an "aha" moment?

For me,
it was not a spoken word
it was one look

I saw in your eyes
a certain
passion

A feeling of strength
and warmth, and calm
spread through me

And I was moved,
irrevocably attached
to you

your eyes
your smile
every little detail

it is simple and complex
at once
it is true love.

© Jennifer W., Saint Albans, WV

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