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I Can't Write A Poem

January 5, 2012
By babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\"

Author Unknown


I can't write a poem,
My hands won't dare touch,
That clean sheet of paper,
Standing in front of my completely blanked out mind,
With its blue and red stripes zooming across,
Around,
And up and down the page,
Causing my fragile head to spin,
Triggering me to fall off my chair,
And shake my head out of disorientation,
Right when I pick my butt back up off the floor,
While I sit back in that stupid chair,
That caused me to fall,
And then I look at that piece of paper that was once empty,
When I realize that it is full of silver scribbles about how,
I can't write a poem



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on Jan. 27 2012 at 4:33 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\"

Author Unknown

Thank you! :)

tealbird said...
on Jan. 27 2012 at 4:31 pm
Very nice. I love the irony in which you say you "can't write a poem" when you clearly kill the art of the written word! Impressive.

on Jan. 26 2012 at 7:07 am
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\"

Author Unknown

Thanks, your comments mean the most to me! (no offense to the others). If I cut out the parts how I can't write a poem, there won't be a poem any longer! But thanks, I know what you mean :). And I also commented on that poem too! All of your poems are fantastic!

on Jan. 25 2012 at 4:47 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
1 article 0 photos 629 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I'd rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I'd rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye's a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example's always clear.” -Edgar Guest

Impressive! This reminds me of my older brother, what he might write if he knew how to write a poem..... oh wait, this is all about NOT being able to write! Silly me! Wait! O_o ARE you my older brother? Anyhow, this is very good and I love it. I'd tell you to cut out the nonsense about not knowing how since you obviously can, but it seems to work for you. Great job! Would you mind commenting/rating a poem called "I'd Rather Not", please? It would mean alot to me.

on Jan. 22 2012 at 8:23 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\"

Author Unknown

Awwww thanks so much :) :). I'd love to check out your poem, and that is what I am going to do right now!

Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Jan. 22 2012 at 8:16 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
16 articles 9 photos 143 comments

Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

This is a really cool poem!! I love the perspective - Just added it to my favorites! Keep writing!! Could you check out my poem - Once a Survivor, Forever a Fighter

on Jan. 22 2012 at 7:21 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\"

Author Unknown

Thanks. The last line is the same as the title, so you must like the title name too lol, thanks again!

on Jan. 22 2012 at 4:56 pm
Kimberlywrites BRONZE, Waikoloa, Hawaii
2 articles 3 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
For we have not been given a spirit of fear but of power and of love and of a sound mind.

II Timothy 1:7

Very neat peom. I love the last line.

on Jan. 21 2012 at 8:45 pm
ElizabethWaldie PLATINUM, Phoenixville, Pennsylvania
31 articles 3 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I wish I could write as mysterious as a cat." ~Edgar Allan Poe

Haha, no problem :)

on Jan. 21 2012 at 8:44 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\"

Author Unknown

It sure is! Thank you so much, glad you like it!

on Jan. 21 2012 at 8:44 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\"

Author Unknown

Thanks, exactly :)!

on Jan. 21 2012 at 8:40 pm
ElizabethWaldie PLATINUM, Phoenixville, Pennsylvania
31 articles 3 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I wish I could write as mysterious as a cat." ~Edgar Allan Poe

Ok. This totally describes the feeling of writer's block. :) Nicely put together.

on Jan. 21 2012 at 8:39 pm
Vanilla4Life BRONZE, Carrollton, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about it."
"Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect. It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfections."

Lol I like this! It's like I don't know how to write a poem but I am doing it right now!~ Cool :D

on Jan. 21 2012 at 8:07 am
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\"

Author Unknown

This was actually the first poem I ever written. I am glad you like it, and its encouraging me to keep on writing poetry! :).

on Jan. 21 2012 at 8:05 am
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\"

Author Unknown

Thanks, oh haha xD.

.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 8:00 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 569 comments

Favorite Quote:
( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

I was confused and curious, but the way the words were put together,WOW, and another huge wow, how long have you been writing to flash my mind free, I admire your poem really I do it kinda helped me improve !!!

on Jan. 21 2012 at 7:56 am
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
9 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"These are the times that try men's souls." - Thomas Paine.

"You don't understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could've been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am." - On the Water Front

"This is my place of failure."

Reminds me of myself, except when I sit down there is no poem! xD

on Jan. 19 2012 at 8:46 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\"

Author Unknown

Thank you!

on Jan. 19 2012 at 8:46 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\"

Author Unknown

Thanks :). Its supposed to be ironic, hopefully haha.

on Jan. 19 2012 at 8:26 pm
stardreamer SILVER, Flemington, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 29 comments
This poem is so cute :) and i like how its about not being able to write a poem. Its a unique way to look at something