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Moving Forward

January 4, 2012
By browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
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browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You may fail, but fall still fighting, don&#039;t give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

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Keep moving forward
Don't look back
Left foot, right foot
Stay on track

Keep your eyes open
And hold your head high
If ever you fall
Get back up and retry

When you come to a roadblock
Don't be discouraged
Gather your strength
And keep on determined

Do these things
And you will see
That no matter what
You CAN succeed

© Hui Y., Potsdam, NY

The author's comments:
I was feeling down one day so i wrote this to give myself a little push in the right direction.
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browneyez16 GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2012 at 7:02 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You may fail, but fall still fighting, don&#039;t give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

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well thank you ever so much miss alice! :D
Michellebrain GOLD said...
on Jan. 9 2012 at 10:02 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
12 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;A wise girl kisses but doesn&#039;t love, listens but doesn&#039;t believe, and leaves before she is left.&rdquo; <br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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no but honestly, its beautiful.
browneyez16 GOLD said...
on Jan. 9 2012 at 9:42 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You may fail, but fall still fighting, don&#039;t give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through&quot; <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> ~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

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Wow...when i wrote this I didn't ever really think about it. I didn't think it was all that great. I'm glad to hear that you think otherwise!!
Michellebrain GOLD said...
on Jan. 9 2012 at 1:58 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;A wise girl kisses but doesn&#039;t love, listens but doesn&#039;t believe, and leaves before she is left.&rdquo; <br /> -Marilyn Monroe

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this is honestly beautiful... i can never write rhyming poems, because i feel like they sound childish, but this is just beautiful. very inspiring :)