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my eye

December 18, 2011
By hotshot PLATINUM, North Sioux City, South Dakota
hotshot PLATINUM, North Sioux City, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
Go confidently in the direction of your dreams. Live the life you have imagined.
Henry David Thoreau


When I see you. I see endless happiness.
When i think of you it is like i am frozen and the only cure is you
when i look int o your eyes i know that you are my life, no my universe.
and when i want to tell you that i love you
and i wont ever let you go.
Even before i leave this earth i know our love is true.
Next time i see you i will be sorry i left you early.
but when i see you even more and i will never let you go.
because my love for you is endless and ETERNAL.

The author's comments:
this is for my grandma, after she died it was hard. but what i learned after her death was that she will always be there for me so what this means is just remember that no matter what. your never alone.

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on Dec. 30 2011 at 5:49 pm
hotshot PLATINUM, North Sioux City, South Dakota
27 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go confidently in the direction of your dreams. Live the life you have imagined.
Henry David Thoreau

thanks invis :)

on Dec. 30 2011 at 5:36 pm
InvisibleHeart GOLD, Barony, Other
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Lovely. Very sweet and heart felt poem!

on Dec. 27 2011 at 7:45 pm
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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Theres so many that I can't pick sorry

Alright then

on Dec. 27 2011 at 7:44 pm
hotshot PLATINUM, North Sioux City, South Dakota
27 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go confidently in the direction of your dreams. Live the life you have imagined.
Henry David Thoreau

all you got to do is ask :)

on Dec. 27 2011 at 7:43 pm
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
39 articles 0 photos 177 comments

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Theres so many that I can't pick sorry

You're welcome Ky and I hope to read more of you're work soon

on Dec. 27 2011 at 7:41 pm
hotshot PLATINUM, North Sioux City, South Dakota
27 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go confidently in the direction of your dreams. Live the life you have imagined.
Henry David Thoreau

thanks :) i am really glad you liked it

on Dec. 27 2011 at 7:37 pm
HiddenAngelInTheDark PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
39 articles 0 photos 177 comments

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Theres so many that I can't pick sorry

Amazing :) i can really relate its so beautiful keep up the good work