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My Colors

December 9, 2011
By orangeforhope BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
orangeforhope BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
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Morning wakens me, Bright, enthusiastic orange.

I Burst with life and energy,

Thirsting for attention,

Ready to face anything.

My joy radiates off of me

I try to make everyone I am with

Feel the Light.

But sometimes, I am calm,

A pale, chilly blue.

Tender and compassionate

Sometimes sad,

Reminiscent about things past,

Wishing I could always be bright, happy orange.



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on Feb. 5 2012 at 6:34 pm
orangeforhope BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
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thank you!

on Feb. 2 2012 at 6:24 pm
orangeforhope BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
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thank you everyone! i really appreciate your feedback.

on Jan. 19 2012 at 4:34 pm
i like your personal touch you added to it. it brings out you're voice.

Emmy45 said...
on Jan. 19 2012 at 11:48 am
loved it! i liked your extended metaphor(:

GraceA said...
on Jan. 18 2012 at 4:06 pm
Cool! this poem seems really personal and I like it!

AnnieSim908 said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 5:00 pm
i really liked this! please write some more!

Willy576 said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 3:11 pm
great poem :)

W.A. Beasley said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 2:13 pm
lovely wording. excellent line breaks. i truly enjoyed reading this poem.

STICKY TACK! said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 2:12 pm
agfhjalhgrgvdlafvhdlancdHSguahfbcvruelafbhlaubfcdhlagf YO THAT BE CHILL HOMESLICE!!

on Jan. 14 2012 at 2:07 pm
BOMB DIGGETY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yumcheese said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 2:01 pm
excellent!

Lesley123 said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 1:59 pm
dude this be chill

billybob said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 1:59 pm
great job! i really like your voice and word choice! definitely a five star poem.

marymary said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 1:57 pm
this poem rocks!

alyssa24433 said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 1:56 pm
great voice! really liking this poem.

BurnsE said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 10:36 am
Wow! great poem.