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November 15, 2011
By mrow363akarobinhood GOLD, Jenks, Oklahoma
mrow363akarobinhood GOLD, Jenks, Oklahoma
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lightning flashes thunder rolls my heart now knows the truths that where never told my tears fall and burn my skin what i just saw light me from within you walk away u leave me stranded my candle fading as the storm is now raging



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raeee GOLD said...
on Mar. 1 2012 at 10:00 pm
raeee GOLD, Walla Walla, Georgia
15 articles 3 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Would she hear me if I called her name? Would she hold me if she knew my shame? Would she even love me if I was to blame?" -Favourite poem ever♥

oops, I meant to write that as a response. But you are a fantastic writer, Mrow. don't lose that sight.

raeee GOLD said...
on Mar. 1 2012 at 9:57 pm
raeee GOLD, Walla Walla, Georgia
15 articles 3 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Would she hear me if I called her name? Would she hold me if she knew my shame? Would she even love me if I was to blame?" -Favourite poem ever♥

Mrow, you're a fantastic writer. Never ever lose sight of that. Okay? 

Acastillo GOLD said...
on Dec. 24 2011 at 5:51 pm
Acastillo GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
11 articles 0 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just because you have flaws, doesn't mean you aren't beautiful ~Zayn Malik

I loved this mrow, it is very good. You should also post the one that you wrote for me about jealousy the other day. I really loved that one too. Nice Job!

on Dec. 19 2011 at 12:57 am
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
45 articles 9 photos 564 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

I didn't mean to leave you...