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WAITING!!

December 2, 2011
By WhiteWings GOLD, Houston, Texas
WhiteWings GOLD, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing lasts forever on this Earth. Smile


Some people would call me straight crazy if they knew about what i had planned.
Though they wouldn't have been able to stop me.
so...here i wait.
I wait for you to drive up.
Sitting still with the rope in my hand.
The knot is final no looking back.
My vision is already blurry.
As a reflex my knee twitches and kicks the empty bottle.
I look at the clock though i didn't comprehend the time.
I still know that somehow the timing is wrong.
Waiting for you to see me die.
Emotions begin to crush me so i start to cry.
Cry for all the pain you put me through...pushed me away but all i wanted was you.
I see no other way out i argued with myself.
Waiting just waiting.
Waiting on my death.


The author's comments:
This was a spur of the moment type of poem...and I'm quite surprised its this long. Comment on it please.

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on Jan. 13 2012 at 9:45 am
RedFeather GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Prose is like walking but poetry is like dancing.
—Paul Valery, poet (1871 - 1945)

Wow. I've felt like this before, but I'm really glad that I got over it and moved on (more or less). This is a very relatable and emotional poem, great work.

on Jan. 1 2012 at 12:41 pm
NightGoddess17 PLATINUM, New City, New York
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wow, this is beautiful! its so relateable! i lovethis!!! its so good, great job!!!

on Jan. 1 2012 at 12:38 pm
WhiteWings GOLD, Houston, Texas
14 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing lasts forever on this Earth. Smile

Thank you. I just want people to know that I too have been through.

on Dec. 9 2011 at 3:11 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 217 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

holy freaking helll......thats EXECTLY how i feel. ive never been able to say it as well as that