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Heartache...

November 19, 2011
By Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
12 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.”
-Marilyn Monroe


The emotions spilling out,
They've been discovered.
Tears filling up my eyes,
and overwhelming my soul,
for there is a sad story to be told.
Those days I just need to face,
and realize my fate,
That I shall never be with him.
If only someone would know what i think,
And if only they knew how much sadness it brings,
Or how much my heart aches everyday.
They'd pity me and say "Poor girl, she'll never get her way".
And I'll sit and I'll cry,
Hiding my feelings inside,
Just what i do, every time.



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on Jan. 9 2012 at 9:38 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
12 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.”
-Marilyn Monroe

thanks.. no problem:)

on Jan. 9 2012 at 9:37 pm
artmantist BRONZE, Willemstad, Other
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very emotional, i like that, wanna check mine out too?

on Dec. 4 2011 at 3:40 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
12 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.”
-Marilyn Monroe

thanks... means a lot!

on Dec. 4 2011 at 3:40 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
12 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.”
-Marilyn Monroe

thanks so much :)

on Dec. 2 2011 at 2:57 pm
HaleyAngelEyes96 PLATINUM, Johnston, Rhode Island
20 articles 1 photo 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A broken heart can not be fully fixed, just repaired for the moment </3"
"When the going gets tough, knock someone out" ;D <3
"It's easy to fail, hard to succeed"

I know the feeling. Itt's never good

on Dec. 2 2011 at 2:55 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

Can't put it better than Wonderment did.  Nice job...

on Dec. 2 2011 at 2:35 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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I like this. The emoutional undertones are strong and its very relatable.

on Dec. 1 2011 at 9:28 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
12 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.”
-Marilyn Monroe

yes, that is correct:) i will definitly check it out!

on Dec. 1 2011 at 9:27 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
12 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.”
-Marilyn Monroe

aww thanks you soo much! :')

on Dec. 1 2011 at 9:27 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
12 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.”
-Marilyn Monroe

thanks so much :)

Risible SILVER said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 8:17 pm
Risible SILVER, Norwalk, Connecticut
7 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sooner or later, those who win are those who think they can." -Richard Bach

great expression of emotion! I can totally relate to what you're describing. It seems like in this case you're talking about a guy you will never be able to be with, correct? But the emotion can be applied to all sorts of situations, which makes it very relatable. Would you check out my poem Here, I Can Barely Think? I'd love to get your feedback. 

Becca17 GOLD said...
on Dec. 1 2011 at 8:15 pm
Becca17 GOLD, Belleville Ontario, Other
10 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Seven Deadly Sins:
Wealth without work
Pleasure without conscience
Science without humanity
Knowledge without character
Politics without principle
Commerce without morality
Worship without sacrifice.”
― Mahatma Gandhi

beautifully written. brings tears because i can relate.

on Dec. 1 2011 at 7:32 pm
kwoodman821 BRONZE, Old Fort, North Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 12 comments
this is amazing! i can relate to it, and i like that about writing! Its so heart-wrenching. Great job!