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October 5, 2011
By Pretzel..Dream GOLD, Longmont, Colorado
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Pretzel..Dream GOLD, Longmont, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
I have not failed. I've just found 10,000 ways that won't work. ~Thomas Edison

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Let me fly,
Fly away today,
Don't call me back,
Don't leave me imprisoned,
Don't reign me in,
Just
Let
Me
Be
Free,
Freedom,
It's all I ask for,
One thing...
Is that to much? You are free why can't I be?

© Nikki K., Anadarko, OK

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Love.Hate.Passion. said...
on Dec. 29 2011 at 6:55 pm
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
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~Hope. Faith. Love~<br /> ~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~<br /> ~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than<br /> a distant memory.~

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Short , cute , and emotionally beautiful. ****
Pretzel..Dream GOLD said...
on Oct. 11 2011 at 5:59 pm
Pretzel..Dream GOLD, Longmont, Colorado
11 articles 2 photos 66 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have not failed. I&#039;ve just found 10,000 ways that won&#039;t work. ~Thomas Edison

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Thank you!
Limey said...
on Oct. 11 2011 at 3:16 pm
Excelent. So much emotion in so few lines.
wilnerfive said...
on Oct. 11 2011 at 2:55 pm

 

Love this! It applies to so many things....very nicely composed. Keep writing! :-)

Disappearing Dot said...
on Oct. 11 2011 at 1:40 pm

Pretzel Dream has read my mind and

then has articulated it so clearly and

so beautifully.

Persistence said...
on Oct. 11 2011 at 11:53 am
I love the last line. Perfect close to what the rest of it brings up.
GOGO said...
on Oct. 11 2011 at 11:45 am
Thoughtful.  Meaningful.  So enjoyed this.
popcorn33 said...
on Oct. 11 2011 at 9:47 am
I love this.  So much feeling.