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September 9, 2011
By Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
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Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
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Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant<br /> Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall<br /> Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me

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Eyes like diamonds
Crystallized and sweet
Lips that are perfect
Or at least they are to me

Voice like an angel
The way she speaks,i cannot explain
There is nothing on this girl
That you could call plain

She is everything i could ask for
So smart, so fine
Please tell me
Why she cannot be mine?

© Raul R., Monte Vista, CO

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Well it's pretty easy to see my inspiration in this song.
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This article has 32 comments.

Evagline.Brisa.Wilder GOLD said...
on Sep. 18 2012 at 9:57 pm
Evagline.Brisa.Wilder GOLD, Collegeville, Pennsylvania
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&quot;Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is limited. Imagination encircles the world.&quot; <br /> -Albert Einstein

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Look at one of mine in reture!
Evagline.Brisa.Wilder GOLD said...
on Sep. 18 2012 at 9:56 pm
Evagline.Brisa.Wilder GOLD, Collegeville, Pennsylvania
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&quot;Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is limited. Imagination encircles the world.&quot; <br /> -Albert Einstein

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Wow. This is great. I never knew a guy could write with such emotion about a girl. Most nimrod boys are just jerks. Okay. I have underestimated what boys can write, but you made me wrong. This is good. I wonder only what she would say. From a girl
AcidRoses SILVER said...
on Sep. 15 2012 at 1:45 pm
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
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&quot;Many that live deserve death and some that have died deserve life, can you give that to them? Do not be to hasty to deal out death and judgement, even the very wise cannot see all ends.&quot;<br /> <br /> <br /> &quot;Can&#039;t get no more free randy!&quot;

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You dog you ;) Lol just kidding xD Great job, reminds me of someone too... Maybe one day she can be yours, don't give up.
Hannabug GOLD said...
on Aug. 21 2012 at 8:35 pm
Hannabug GOLD, Winona, Minnesota
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&quot;Don&#039;t only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the Divine.&quot; Ludwig van Beethoven

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This is probably one of my new favorite poems now :D  
so_joy SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 4:40 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Great imagery! Nicely written. Good job!

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!

TMarie42 SILVER said...
on Jun. 16 2012 at 9:39 pm
TMarie42 SILVER, Orland, California
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Pulvis et umbra sumus.

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Really nice imagery and rhyme!
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD said...
on Jun. 16 2012 at 9:10 pm
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
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&ldquo;We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.&rdquo; - Doctor Seuss

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again, wow. Love it. I loive the description. 5 stars all the way
RebeccaMey SILVER said...
on May. 6 2012 at 3:51 pm
RebeccaMey SILVER, Poughkeepsie, New York
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This is my favorite. You really hit home on this one for me, haha. I really like the depth of this one. 
Tornado Misha BRONZE said...
on Mar. 9 2012 at 10:11 pm
Tornado Misha BRONZE, Ng, Other
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I think it was nice. The bottom part of the poem wasn't all that descriptive, but if that's what you meant to do, it's fine :)

Btw: (question for everyone_....how come it's so easy to become a VIP????

TimmyTiger GOLD said...
on Mar. 4 2012 at 9:24 pm
TimmyTiger GOLD, Somewhere, Indiana
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&quot;It&#039;s time to nut up, or shut up.&quot; - Woodey Harrelson &quot;Zombieland&quot;

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As a girl, I love this poem! It had a nice flow. Nice rhythm, great word choice.
youngspeare BRONZE said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 3:54 am
youngspeare BRONZE, Nairobi, Other
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w, so sweet! If there is such a girl in your life get her to read this poem, she's melt for sure ;) :) Great job! 
Would love it if you could check out my poem "Ghosts of the Past" and rate/comment? I'd appreciate it.
St_Jimmy BRONZE said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 7:02 pm
St_Jimmy BRONZE, Whiteville, North Carolina
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Live free or DIE!

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I loved this!  The form and language is amazing.

There's nothing like a good poem to brighten up your day :)

Keep up the good work!

RaveFire PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 5:59 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

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this is really srtong and really good but i dont think its the kind of stuff the put in the mag. good luck tho :)
no.name. PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 27 2011 at 7:20 pm
no.name. PLATINUM, Ceres, California
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I loved it. When I first saw the title I immediately thought of the song "The Girl" by City and Colour. But this was lovely. 
megsloveslions GOLD said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 8:46 pm
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
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Adorable, I loved it! So sweet!
Wonderment DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 8:43 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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Aww this is so cute. I love it, its just cute. :)
HeatherBee BRONZE said...
on Nov. 24 2011 at 8:43 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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aawwwwwwwwwwwww ^^ that was very sweet
J-Poetry-R SILVER said...
on Nov. 14 2011 at 7:00 pm
J-Poetry-R SILVER, Enterprise, Alabama
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&quot;My greatest writings are on the pages of life&quot;<br /> - J-Poetry-R

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what can i say that hasn't been said? Nice work and like the word choice because its relatable
_emilia_ SILVER said...
on Nov. 7 2011 at 2:49 pm
_emilia_ SILVER, Somers Point, New Jersey
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It was great and if I was this girl I'd be begging to be with you!!!
Loftus GOLD said...
on Nov. 2 2011 at 7:08 pm
Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
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Love it! Total way to steal her heart. Amazing job!<3