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Nighttime

August 17, 2011
By megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
11 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live like there's no tommorow


Fireflies blinking
in the moonlight
crickets' chirping
drifting in the breeze

A darkened sky
like a large black
pupil
waiting to see
the sun's morning glow
arise in the east

Stars watching
looking down from above
sparkling
in the deep blue pool
of the night

The author's comments:
I just wrote this for a contest...so yeah that's about it.

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on Jul. 17 2012 at 12:51 pm
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
11 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live like there's no tommorow

Thank you very much!

on Jul. 17 2012 at 12:49 pm
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
11 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live like there's no tommorow

Thanks! Ill definitly check out yours!

on Jul. 17 2012 at 12:44 pm
albinotiger GOLD, Gloucester, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win&quot;- Stephen King<br /> &ldquo;In life, unlike chess, the game continues after checkmate&rdquo;- Isaac Asimov

Really good descriptive words its like im really there!

Maybe check out my stuff sometime


on Jul. 17 2012 at 12:35 pm
LongLazyDays55 BRONZE, Other, Other
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Favorite Quote:
I haven&#039;t failed. I just haven&#039;t found 10,000 ways that won&#039;t work. [Thomas Edison]<br /> <br /> When words fail, music speaks.

Love the subject and the words you've used! Really good! :)

on Dec. 5 2011 at 4:15 pm
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
11 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live like there&#039;s no tommorow

Thanks, 2 both of u lol

on Dec. 4 2011 at 9:55 pm
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
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I agree here! I really like your poems they are very beautiful!!!!!!

on Nov. 29 2011 at 2:24 pm
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
11 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live like there&#039;s no tommorow

I wish I could see everything that way too... ;) thanks

on Nov. 24 2011 at 8:11 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper<br /> <br /> Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

OMG love the word choice ^^ great work!!

on Nov. 23 2011 at 10:29 am
megsloveslions GOLD, Thomasville, Pennsylvania
11 articles 0 photos 71 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live like there&#039;s no tommorow

Thanks soooo much! Like I said, I love comment! :)

on Nov. 23 2011 at 10:18 am
SeasofSorrow GOLD, Miami, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life aint all roses...it aint all thorns either.&quot; Firefox Magazine Pioneer <br /> &quot;Oh life goes on things will be ok, oh time flies, tomorrow is a brand new day, everyone makes a couple mistakes, somewhere along the way.&quot; Along the Way, EDGES, Aaron Tveit

I kind of want to sit down next to that girl who seems so entinced with something everyone sees...can I see it with her? will I see it the same way? It makes me long to feel absorbed with something mutual...simply because what is the mutual feeling is a feeling most pleasant for sure!

on Nov. 23 2011 at 10:15 am
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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I love the amount of discription. It paints a picture.:)