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i am here, but i am not

July 26, 2011
By kodaMisfit BRONZE, Kingman, Arizona
kodaMisfit BRONZE, Kingman, Arizona
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i wanna die young, as late as possible<br /> -unknown


I stare blankly at the grey haze ahead of me.
I feel as though i am floating, yet my feet touch the ground.
The path i take isnt known, yet it feels right.
This place gives me a sence of nirvana, i feel at peace.
As far as i can see there is no one around, yet i dont feel alone.
I try to race through my memories, yet nothing comes to mind.
I ask questions like why am i here, and where am i at,
but at the same time it doesnt matter to me.
I take a deep breath and close my eyes.
I begin to effortlessly drift away into this zone.
I feel like i am here but i am not.


The author's comments:
i was looking out the window, it was a cloudy day and i just started thinking and it all flowed out

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on Jul. 29 2011 at 11:10 am
FlyleafFreak DIAMOND, Loveland, Colorado
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&quot;I have faith in fools;self confidence my friends call it&quot;~Edger Allan Poe<br /> &quot;In this world of infinite insanity, your friends are the best psychiatrists you will ever have.&quot;~Me

This was really good. It gave me a lulling feeling, just really reflective. short and finished nicely, keep it up