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Like Butter

July 22, 2011
By MNSTRcooki BRONZE, Boulder, Colorado
MNSTRcooki BRONZE, Boulder, Colorado
4 articles 5 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Cookie monster love monster cookie<-------that was me:]


Thrusting picket signs painted with the color of the sky the cardboard was carving through
*like butter*
Her throat was swelling up with the threat to cry
But she painted a sunny day behind her eyelids
and let one tear slip by

The self tied ropes around his ribs were forcing the air out of his empty lungs
*exhale*
and he choked on nothing because nothing was sucked back in
*inhale*
and they laughed in his face
and their spit burned his skin

She felt the thin stems between her thumb and forefinger as she slipped daisies in his gun barrel
the white daisies that grew in his weapon like weeds
and he watched her put them there
and she watched him grit his teeth

He stood behind caution tape looking down a tunnel
with no light at the end
and they frowned
*and they smiled*
with his heart in their hand

The author's comments:
It's about standing up for what you think is right

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on Jul. 29 2011 at 12:57 am
MNSTRcooki BRONZE, Boulder, Colorado
4 articles 5 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Cookie monster love monster cookie<-------that was me:]

thankyou so much!:D i will

on Jul. 29 2011 at 12:56 am
MNSTRcooki BRONZE, Boulder, Colorado
4 articles 5 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Cookie monster love monster cookie<-------that was me:]

thankyou! im glad u enjoyed it:3

on Jul. 29 2011 at 12:56 am
MNSTRcooki BRONZE, Boulder, Colorado
4 articles 5 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Cookie monster love monster cookie<-------that was me:]

wow! thankyou so much:D

on Jul. 28 2011 at 10:12 am
FlyleafFreak DIAMOND, Loveland, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"I have faith in fools;self confidence my friends call it"~Edger Allan Poe
"In this world of infinite insanity, your friends are the best psychiatrists you will ever have."~Me

This is the best poem I have ever read on this site so far. Stunningly vivid images i liked how you put actions and thoughts in asterics. 5/5 and a favorite for sure. beautiful, keep it up

on Jul. 26 2011 at 8:19 pm
eram1029 BRONZE, Hialeah, Florida
1 article 1 photo 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Human potential only goes as far as it is challenged.

very good, very strong 

on Jul. 26 2011 at 5:27 pm
Juliainstead BRONZE, Oakland, California
1 article 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Not all who wander are lost."
-J.R.R Tolkien

This is great. Keep writing!