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Mess up

May 5, 2011
By Cubster BRONZE, Lindstrom, Minnesota
Cubster BRONZE, Lindstrom, Minnesota
3 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You may be on the right track but you'll get run over if you just sit there."


Those Little things that ruin your day,








In every single how and way _









I missed a game, I ruined my hair,









I can’t locate my underwearre.










I lost a bet, I killed a mouse,



My dog tracked mud around the




house.








I tipped a chair, I spilled my milk,



I ripped my brand new robe




Of silk.


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Cubster BRONZE said...
on Nov. 17 2011 at 4:32 pm
Cubster BRONZE, Lindstrom, Minnesota
3 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You may be on the right track but you'll get run over if you just sit there."

Thank You! I wrote this a while ago and I didn't think anyone would read it. I really appreciate that.

on Aug. 2 2011 at 12:17 am
ohheyyyelli SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
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flow as well*

on Aug. 2 2011 at 12:17 am
ohheyyyelli SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
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This is so light, it's one of those pick-me-up poems.

Really great flow as flow, the rhymes felt natural, not forced. Really enjoyed it (: